HomerSexual's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Propercy]

I escaped

Right click>rewind

Makakaov responds:

You didn't escape. You rewind time, so your fail hasn't happened yet in the game. But you did beafore you rewind, so well...

[Versus (escape)]

Good job.

Everything was great but the controls were wierd, and awkard.
Just use the W,A,S,D or the Arrow keys next time.

4/5

agby responds:

But how will you move diagonally?

[The Metallica Quiz]

Eh....

Just one suggestion... when you get an answer wrong, and the quiz starts over, I would like for you yo change that.

What you could to is in the frames actions on the first frame put this:
var answers:Number = 0;
Then when they click on the right answer it adds a 1 to the value of 0.
So on each button it says:
on(release, releaseOutside){
gotoAndPlay(nextFrame){
}

but the ones with the right answer says:
on(release, releaseOutside){
var answers +=1;
gotoAndPlay(nextFrame){

then at the end have it say "You got (number) questions right out of (number).

Just an idea.

Sh0ckFyre responds:

I'm a noob when it comes to flash, so to compensate I just had you redo the question you were at. I'll have to add that into my next quiz. Thanks for the suggestion!

[Missionz]

Ok...

Uh, there was no instructions, and the game did not make any sense. :/

[The 501st Team!]

Promovideo

I'm waiting for this submission. Hit me up, when you release it!

[Ufos]

Nice...

You should make a crossheir for this.
Nothing much else to say, but just incase (crossheir code):
onClipEvent(enterFrame){Mouse.hide, this.startDrag = true);}

carnage157 responds:

My Friend, I am just the maker of the SOUND of this game .

[Revolution 2P Pong]

Good Job!

It was good, but 2 things.
1. Add some music :P
2. Instead of win a person hits the ball, and the opposing person misses the game is over, just keep a score count. Very easy.

Overall it was good. I have you 4/5.

[Virtual Guy 1.0]

Nice little concept

I agree with loansindi, but their were 2 little things that I didn't really like in my opinion, that are actually very easy to fix. The money variable would go down in the negatives, so make it to where if you reach 0 or negative ( <= ) the buttons would be unusable.
Second thing that the hair and beard grow to fast, and that I have to constantly cut, and shave him.

Other than that I really enjoyed it, and soon you will be making flash games like a pro!
4/5 8/10

[Small Adventure Game]

Geeeewwddd.

The flash game was a total advancement from your previous ones. Change the FPS to 30 for the character to walk faster... if so.
Can you build of this more? Like a turn based stradegy?
Give the enemies a hitTest to go a battle you know?

This was good. Since there was effort put forth into this flash I give thee a......... 5.

fallensoul289 responds:

thanks i will change the fps and add on to it

[DodgeorDie!!!]

Good for your first.

Since this is actually your first flash game, I have to say this is very good for one. I liked how you included songs, and have the game blink to try to add fun, and difficulty. I favorite this.